Summary:
Bidding Farewell to Arms by Roman Skaskiw is an essay about the time he spent in the army. He could not decide whether he wanted to stay in the army, or to resign. He spent most of his time as a name on a list, until he spent 545 days in Afghanistan. After leaving, he spent a year finding himself and his friends. He spent time with family and got a job. After a year he resigned from the army.
Paraphrase:
Decisions shape our lives in many ways. We make simple choices everyday that we often do not even think about. We brush our hair and teeth, go to bed, and decide what we want to do for the day. When faced with a hard question, we have to decide what is best for us. Roman Skaskiw discussed his choices with the army in a narrative titled "Bidding Farewell to Arms". He challenges himself to find what life can be like without the army, and after a year of trying to decide whether or not he wanted to continue to serve, he resigned from the army but kept all his memories with him.
Quote:
Roman Skaskiw made the decision to resign from the army after a year of waiting. He wanted to make it clear life was more important to him, and he wanted to live it to the fullest. He writes, "I would also say that greater than the adventure of fighting our government's wars is the adventure of pursuing your own happiness in the world." (Page 121, paragraph 18). This quote is important to the text because it shows that his decision is his own, and he wants to make himself happy where as being in the army did not cause him happiness anymore.
Tuesday, October 27, 2015
Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Understanding Writing Analyses
What we now understand about analyzing writing:
You need to follow certain steps, in order.
You need to know what questions to ask.
You need to know what the point of the analysis is.
How to identify patterns in data and info.
You need to know how to connect to readers.
You need to look at text and see how it supports your claim.
You need to know how authors establish authority .
You need to know what emotions the text appeals to.
You need to know that analysis has to be instructional and informational.
How "Stay Sweet As You Are" fits the criteria:
The author uses a clear point to establish the topic sentence. He claimed that advertisements aimed at women encourage them to like beauty products that reinforce a male's role in their life. He identified patterns in his data by analyzing the advertisements. He specifically picked apart ads that used men to reinforce the product. In the soap ad he proved that the soap was showing that women who want to get married need to have clear skin and even if they have wit and grace men wont be attracted to them. He looked at the text in the ads and explained how this supported his claim. He also knew what the emotions in the advertisements were and showed that they were trying to shame women into buying the products. He also is informative in his analysis by sticking to his claim, and using three different ads to prove his point. The essay "Stay Sweet as You Are" definitely fits the criteria to be an analysis essay.
You need to follow certain steps, in order.
You need to know what questions to ask.
You need to know what the point of the analysis is.
How to identify patterns in data and info.
You need to know how to connect to readers.
You need to look at text and see how it supports your claim.
You need to know how authors establish authority .
You need to know what emotions the text appeals to.
You need to know that analysis has to be instructional and informational.
How "Stay Sweet As You Are" fits the criteria:
The author uses a clear point to establish the topic sentence. He claimed that advertisements aimed at women encourage them to like beauty products that reinforce a male's role in their life. He identified patterns in his data by analyzing the advertisements. He specifically picked apart ads that used men to reinforce the product. In the soap ad he proved that the soap was showing that women who want to get married need to have clear skin and even if they have wit and grace men wont be attracted to them. He looked at the text in the ads and explained how this supported his claim. He also knew what the emotions in the advertisements were and showed that they were trying to shame women into buying the products. He also is informative in his analysis by sticking to his claim, and using three different ads to prove his point. The essay "Stay Sweet as You Are" definitely fits the criteria to be an analysis essay.
Page 175, Mad Men: Stillbirth of the American Dream
1. Heather Havrilesky's main insight about Mad Men is that it represents the current desire for more than we have in America. It represents the difference between the American Dream and reality for most people in America. Paragraph four page 171 she writes "Somehow Mad Men captures this ultra-mediated, post modern moment, underscoring the disconnect between the American dream and reality by distilling our deep-seated frustrations as a nation into painfully palpable vignettes."
2. Havrilesky establishes her authority by connecting with readers. She starts by addressing the audience clearly as Americans, and then goes on about how we are striving for more things. She insists that stories from when we were younger make an importance to expand our dreams.
3.She appeals to readers emotions by bringing up what it is like to be an American and grow up in a country like this. On page 170 she wrote "It's a sickness that's infused in our blood, a dissatisfaction with the ordinary that's instilled in us from childhood." She also connected through talking about stories the general public knows. On page 170 it is said "Having been told repeated stories about the fairest in the land, the most powerful, the richest, the most heroic, (Snow White, Pokemon, Ronald McDonald, Lady Gaga), eventually we buy into these creation myths and concede their overwhelming importance in the universe."
4. I did not know anything about Mad Men before reading this passage. I still do not want to watch it because I don't find shows like that interesting. I think that when I am older I will probably enjoy it, but for right now shows like Mad Men are too heavy for me.
2. Havrilesky establishes her authority by connecting with readers. She starts by addressing the audience clearly as Americans, and then goes on about how we are striving for more things. She insists that stories from when we were younger make an importance to expand our dreams.
3.She appeals to readers emotions by bringing up what it is like to be an American and grow up in a country like this. On page 170 she wrote "It's a sickness that's infused in our blood, a dissatisfaction with the ordinary that's instilled in us from childhood." She also connected through talking about stories the general public knows. On page 170 it is said "Having been told repeated stories about the fairest in the land, the most powerful, the richest, the most heroic, (Snow White, Pokemon, Ronald McDonald, Lady Gaga), eventually we buy into these creation myths and concede their overwhelming importance in the universe."
4. I did not know anything about Mad Men before reading this passage. I still do not want to watch it because I don't find shows like that interesting. I think that when I am older I will probably enjoy it, but for right now shows like Mad Men are too heavy for me.
Thursday, October 15, 2015
Page 138 and Page 141
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Large Decisions during the week
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How it affected me/How I decided
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Small Decisions during the week
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How it affected me/How I decided
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When to show up to class
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I decided I would show up for classes a little bit early because it
could help in case I had any questions about the homework or struggled with
anything. This has affected my grades by keeping me prepared and helping to
keep my grades where they are.
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What to buy for meals
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I know that when I eat certain things my skin with break out or I won’t
feel full. I buy things that keep me full and energized and then I am
prepared for classes and focused throughout the day.
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Large Decisions during the month
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How it affected me/How I decided
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Small Decisions during the month
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How it affected me/How I decided
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Travel team softball
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It affected whether or not I would keep my job. I decided not to play
because I wanted to focus on school.
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When to get my nails done
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I decide around when I have free time. I also choose the design
depending on the month and what I find interesting
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Large Decisions during the year
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How it affected me/How I decided
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Small Decisions during the year
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How it affected me/How I decided
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Where to attend college
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I decided based on where I wanted to go and what my major was. I
really wanted to go somewhere far away from Washington
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When to go to softball practice
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I wanted to be on time but also have time to finish my homework. I
decided to show up at a time that worked for me and the practice time
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Page 141
Traveling: Kayak vs. Expedia
Expedia had better pictures of the travel destinations. They
both were ordered by price, but I preferred Expedia because
I was able to pick and choose where I was going and from where I was departing.
Kayak auto filled a lot of information and made it harder to choose where to
go. The pictures were not very satisfying and the prices were more expensive
than Expedia had. Expedia was a more advanced website, with lots of customer reviews
and helpful hints on where to stay. They definitely had more options on the
site and made sure their website was easy to navigate. I would add more color
to the Kayak website. Besides being less interesting it also opened more
browsers instead of staying on the one browser I was on. I would add more
choices for the costumer and make sure the price was in numerical order because
the prices were more all over the place. The hotels on Expedia definitely caught my eye a lot more than Kayaks so I would add in better pictures. Expedia also had helpful information like when you can cancel tickets and how many people were looking at the hotel. It also told you how many tickets were left without even clicking on the show more tab. Kayak shows you very little information even when opening the show more tab. Overall Expedia had a better layout and had more information than Kayak did.
Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Taking stock of your writing
1. What was your main
point (thesis)? “The Moral of the Story”?
My main point was to show that books can change a person,
and how this book changed me.
2. Who was your
audience? What did you assume about them? What “audience needs” did
you have to consider in writing the paper? How did you tailor your
writing to them?
My audience was my peers so I wrote for a group of people
who could easily understand the situation.
3. What feedback or
reactions did you get at various times while composing this paper, and how was
this helpful? What other kinds of input or support did you get from
classmates, teacher, tutors, others? Were you able to make use of
it? How, or why not?
My teacher was helpful and made sure that I was writing
properly up to the point of writing the paper. She used in class assignments to
help us fill in missing spots in our paper and to help guide how narratives are
written. My peers helped me correct my mistakes and they pointed out placer
where I could use some work. It was helpful to see where I needed more or less
writing and explanation.
4. What did you find
interesting about the process you went through in writing this paper, and what
did you learn from it?
I found how easily it was to write about myself versus
another person, and that I knew myself a lot better than I thought I did.
5. What questions do you
have for me about the paper? (What part(s) of the paper would you like me
to focus on? What do you see as the paper’s strengths, and what areas are
you unsure of?)
I'm unsure my paper flows very well. I think an important part
of my paper are the first and last paragraphs. I think that it could use some
adjusting to flow and work better together. I also think I could've told more
of the story within the paper.
Monday, October 12, 2015
Narrative Rough Draft
Fourth grade is not a big deal to most kids. I was
very wrapped up in my own life and couldn’t care less about what we were reading
in class. I never thought it would lead me to my favorite book. Although I loved reading, I hated sitting still in a classroom full
of sweaty kids for 20 minutes at the end of class just to figure out whether or
not the story my teacher was reading was worth my time. I usually got through
these moments by tugging on my friend’s hair and pulling it into a braid.
Sometimes though, my teacher would pick an amazing chapter book, ones I would
never consider reading, and she would work her way through it chapter by
chapter. Most of the time, these books were clever life lessons I quickly
picked up on and disregarded because who really wants to read books like that.
But one day, all of those lessons changed. I found getting read aloud to painful
and annoying. I wanted to open a book and finish it in a day, not drag it out
over months of reading one chapter a day. The day my teacher pulled out
Touching Spirit Bear by Ben Mikaelsen.
The walls were a buttery yellow, with several paintings on
them. Vines and leaves on one wall and students art hung in frames around the
room. Book shelves covered the base of the walls, and the windows were always
open. Outside there were trees and birds were constantly singing. The desks
were in rows of three, with special self-managers located next to the teacher’s
desk. Computers were on one side of the room, old and beige with loud keys that
stuck when pressed too hard. Cubbies were next to the sink, and to the right
there was a Japanese box turtle named Tortel. 30 kids were in the room, and at
the front they sat on couches and wooden chairs for storytelling and reading.
We played with each other’s hair and tried to stay quiet while the old sassy
teacher read Touching Spirit Bear.
My teacher had silvery grey hair and
a pair of unrimmed glasses. She was pleasantly plump and wore loose t-shirts
and slacks with black crocs. She had a small tattoo on her ankle as well. My
closest friends wore shorts with t-shirts and we all had bangs. Other children
wore jeans and a sweatshirt with the schools name on it. Everyone was tired,
and barely kept their eyes open as we sat around on the cold floor. We
circled her as she started the book, and I found myself falling deeper and
deeper in love with it. This book was so different from anything I had ever
read. The words flowed off my teacher’s lips like she had memorized them. I was
so focused on the book I often found myself pulling too hard on a friend’s
hair. We all looked attentively towards the teacher who read to us the book of
her choice. When she got excited she would jump while reading or her eyes would
expand and I was lost in it all. My friend’s never really understood my
connection to the book and why I enjoyed it so much.
The book, Touching Spirit Bear by
Ben Mikaelsen, focuses on a boy named Cole. Cole is an abused teenage boy, who
finds himself in a lot of trouble with the law. With the possibility of being
tried as an adult he quickly looks for an alternative choice to become part of
the community again. Thinking he doesn’t have another chance at life, his
parole officer helps Cole join a group called circle justice. Cole is shortly
after asked to spend a year on a remote island in Alaska. Throughout the book I
followed Cole in every choice he made, thinking on how people would react if I
did the same thing. I told myself this book was it. This was as good as books
were ever going to get. I connected with Cole in a much different way than I
first expected. This book was shaping me into the person I wanted to become. I
spent the next year reading it as much as possible, after getting my own copy
for Christmas.
I wondered for a very long time why
I connected to Cole. I had never lived on my own in the woods. I had never tried
to fight a bear. I didn’t break laws and beat people up. I was a generally good
kid when it came to the law and school. What I realized was I connected to his
anger. Cole had never been good enough for anyone. I saw this as an in to his
life. I had felt growing up pressure from my own parents and my teachers. I was
expected to do well in all aspects of school, because I was good at it. I wasn’t
able to release my anger like Cole was. I also found myself connect to his home
life. While my parents aren’t physically abusive I find myself in the same
frustrating situations Cole is in. This was a lot for fourth grade me to
handle, but I understood why this book was important.
This book has helped me understand
not to judge people and to show compassion toward others that we may not know.
In some ways the book has helped me relate to others who have read it, and even
others who have not. We can compare books and share our feelings on why the
book impacted us. This particular book was important at the time because it
showed how kids affect other people lives at any age. It also showed us family
values and why it is important not to let your own family change your values. I am my own person and the book showed my younger self that I could be
whoever I chose to be and change no matter how old I was. My life would not be
the same without this book. It is possible I never would have learned to accept
myself as I am and change my attitude towards my life. I needed to see that
every day is precious and we must live life as well as we can even with
challenges. Understanding how to be compassionate has helped me in many ways.
When my friends talk to me about a certain situation in their life I can help
them figure out a helpful solution. I learned what it meant to be willing to do
anything to help someone and this book even helped me decide what I wanted to
do when I grew up, which was becoming a teacher.
I realize now that this book was my first real outlet
for my life. I tried to busy myself with books for years after this. Even now
reading this book brings back memories of finding my true self. I remember the
feeling I got from this book and how comfortable with myself I became. I
remember finding myself living a happier life after reading this book. I was
connecting to people better. I found a way to see positives in my life. This
book is something I turn to for comfort. It might not be the most thrilling
experience, and getting a book read aloud to you is excruciatingly painful but
it definitely helped me grow.
Thursday, October 8, 2015
Five Characteristics in My Essay
1. What happened? Who was involved?
When I was in elementary school, my fourth grade teacher introduced my to my favorite book, Touching Spirit Bear. Everyone in our class was on the fence about this book, but I was intrigued by the thought of a Spirit Bear. My teacher read this book out loud every day after recess and I slowly fell in love with it.
2. When and Where did it happen?
It happened when I was in fourth grade, and it was in my classroom at Breidablik Elementary School. The room itself was rather large for a classroom, books lined the walls. We were all sitting in a small section at the front of the room in old couches and on the floor. We did each others hair mindlessly while looking to the teacher who knew what the book held beneath its cover.
3. What makes the story come alive?
The connection to the children, and being read to. We can all relate to being young and the feeling of a new book. Most of us can remember a time of being read aloud to and what it feels like to be in that moment lost in someones words. The feelings in the room of tired children and an over excited teacher.
4. Who's telling the story?
I am telling the story, but it is a younger version of myself. It will be a first person narrative.
5. Why does the story matter?
This story matters because it introduced me to my favorite book and that has changed who I am today. This book reminds me that no matter what situation I am in I can pull through and change myself into a better human and a better friend. The point is, that books can come out of nowhere and show you who you want to be and how to get there.
When I was in elementary school, my fourth grade teacher introduced my to my favorite book, Touching Spirit Bear. Everyone in our class was on the fence about this book, but I was intrigued by the thought of a Spirit Bear. My teacher read this book out loud every day after recess and I slowly fell in love with it.
2. When and Where did it happen?
It happened when I was in fourth grade, and it was in my classroom at Breidablik Elementary School. The room itself was rather large for a classroom, books lined the walls. We were all sitting in a small section at the front of the room in old couches and on the floor. We did each others hair mindlessly while looking to the teacher who knew what the book held beneath its cover.
3. What makes the story come alive?
The connection to the children, and being read to. We can all relate to being young and the feeling of a new book. Most of us can remember a time of being read aloud to and what it feels like to be in that moment lost in someones words. The feelings in the room of tired children and an over excited teacher.
4. Who's telling the story?
I am telling the story, but it is a younger version of myself. It will be a first person narrative.
5. Why does the story matter?
This story matters because it introduced me to my favorite book and that has changed who I am today. This book reminds me that no matter what situation I am in I can pull through and change myself into a better human and a better friend. The point is, that books can come out of nowhere and show you who you want to be and how to get there.
Literacy: A Lineage
The author Melanie Luken starts Literacy: A Lineage by explaining the role her father had in her life of literacy. She spoke on how they would go for bike rides every Sunday afternoon to a bell tower where they would read a poem by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow. As they both grew older, she started to go by herself making the bike riding a tradition. Her literacy came from her fathers love of literature and her definition of literacy was changed because of who her father was, She comments on how their literacy was more than just reading and writing, but rather the tradition it held with it.
She goes on to explain who her father is. She writes about how he has tried almost every art, including poetry and song writing. At first he had hoped to become a professor, but he ended up as a stay at home dad for his daughter making their relationship grow and they became close even if it wasn't easy at times. She spoke on how intelligent and imaginative her father was and how that benefited her daily life as a child. He taught her famous quotes and when she learned to read and write she would do it as often as she could. She remembered going to the library as a child with her brothers, and the books she wrote her father for Christmas.
She goes on to touch base on how she majored in French, upholding her tradition of language. She had struggled with it because she didn't have a tradition from her childhood with French. She found that tradition had changed her definition of literacy and she wanted it to be a part of her lineage. She touches base on how she may not be rich with money or physical things but her father made her rich in love of literature and language. Even though he passed she still has these things to remember him.
She goes on to explain who her father is. She writes about how he has tried almost every art, including poetry and song writing. At first he had hoped to become a professor, but he ended up as a stay at home dad for his daughter making their relationship grow and they became close even if it wasn't easy at times. She spoke on how intelligent and imaginative her father was and how that benefited her daily life as a child. He taught her famous quotes and when she learned to read and write she would do it as often as she could. She remembered going to the library as a child with her brothers, and the books she wrote her father for Christmas.
She goes on to touch base on how she majored in French, upholding her tradition of language. She had struggled with it because she didn't have a tradition from her childhood with French. She found that tradition had changed her definition of literacy and she wanted it to be a part of her lineage. She touches base on how she may not be rich with money or physical things but her father made her rich in love of literature and language. Even though he passed she still has these things to remember him.
Tuesday, October 6, 2015
Literacy Narrative
1.
“Her tongue became dry and her lips were
cracked, but she only was aware of being terrified of the water.” Page 130
paragraph 9 Lydia’s Story
2.
“She described it as ‘rushing like the Colorado
River’”. Page 129 Paragraph 6 Lydia’s Story
3.
“Then, one morning, she woke to find that her
feet and the sleeping bag were soaking wet, and there was standing water
throughout her house.” Page 129 paragraph 5 Lydia’s Story
“As Lydia was telling her story I heard strength and resolve in her
voice.” Page 131 paragraph 12 Lydia’s Story
4.
-Touching Spirit Bear
-Writing little books on books we read
-Reading groups with different levels
-Teaching younger students to read, “Reading buddies”
5.
Touching Spirit Bear is my favorite book. I want
to share this because it changed my attitude about judging people before we
knew them. In the book, a boy bullies and beats up another kid who hasn’t bothered
him at all. Instead of going to juvenile hall for Cole’s actions he goes to a
circle of justice meeting, and is sent to live on a remote island by himself.
Through the book he learns how to respect his surroundings and change into a
better person. My 4th grade
teacher read this book out loud to the class, and it slowly changed from a book
to fill the silence while I did someone’s hair to asking for this book for Christmas
a year later.
6.
Many kids were read aloud to in school when they
were younger. I’ll have to explain the classroom setting and how the book changed
for me. I’ll have to show them why it is my favorite book, and explain with
detail how the books affects me to have others understand what I am serious
about in the book.
7.
Affectionate and serious about the book, but
humorous about my childhood and about how kids don’t understand what
seriousness is being thrown at them.
8.
Will be printed out and could add the book
itself to the narrative.
9.
The walls were a buttery yellow, with several
paintings on them. Vines and leaves on one wall and students art hung in frames
around the room. Book shelves covered the base of the walls, and the windows were
always open. Outside there were trees and birds were constantly singing. The
desks were in rows of three, with special self-managers located next to the teacher’s
desk. Computers were on one side of the room, old and beige with loud keys that
stuck when pressed too hard. Cubbies were next to the sink, and to the right
there was a Japanese box turtle named Tortel. 30 kids were in the room, and at
the front they sat on couches and wooden chairs for storytelling and reading.
We played with each other’s hair and tried to stay quiet while the old sassy
teacher read Touching Spirit Bear.
10.
The birds outside whistling secrets to each other,
while the teacher animated the books words. Kid’s giggles to the left and right
and from time to time you could hear a soft “ow” when some ones hair was pulled
too hard. Pencils scratched on paper while others drew, but I was quiet and
only made comments when the teacher asked about the story.
11.
Deep inhale and you would smell dirt and grass
from the recent recess. The teachers perfume loomed in the air, as did her
lunch she struggled to eat on time while teaching. She aired out the room with the
air from the windows which clung to every ones shirts making them smell a sweet
mix of sugar and evergreen.
12.
Comfortable and at home in this space. Tired
from the long day but intrigued by the new book.
13.
The dryness of the air and the leftover peanut
butter and jelly from lunch.
14.
The teacher had silvery grey hair and a pair of
unrimmed glasses. She was pleasantly plump and wore loose t-shirts and slacks
with black crocs. She had a small tattoo on her ankle as well. My closest friends wore shorts with t-shirts and we all had bangs.
Other children wore jeans and a sweatshirt with the schools name on it. Everyone
was tired, and barely kept their eyes open as we sat around on the cold floor.
15.
The only dialogue was the teacher reading aloud.
Other than that kids would whisper about who likes who or ask for certain
braids in their hair.
16.
We all sat on the hard floor or couches. No one
really used the wooden chairs, they were even less comfortable than the floor.
We all looked attentively towards the teacher who read to us the book of her
choice. When she got excited she would jump while reading or her eyes would
expand and we would all follow her words.
17.
This story is important to me because it showed
me my favorite book. This book has helped me understand not to judge people and
to show compassion toward others that we may not know. In some ways the book
has helped me relate to others who have read it, and even others who have not. We
can compare books and share our feelings on why the book impacted us. This
particular book was important at the time because it showed how kids affect
other people lives at any age. It also showed us family values and why it is
important not to let your own family change your values. You are your own
person and the book showed a younger self that I could be whoever I chose to be
and change no matter how old I was. My life would not be the same without this book. It is possible I never would have learned to accept myself as I am and change my attitude towards my life. I needed to see that everyday is precious and we must live life as well as we can even with challenges. Understanding how to be compassionate has helped me in many ways. When my friends talk to me about a certain situation in their life I can help them figure out a helpful solution. I learned what it meant to be willing to do anything to help someone and this book even helped me decide what I wanted to do when I grew up, which was becoming a teacher.
Thinking and Acting Rhetorically: Part 2
While I was reading through others definitions I noticed we all talked about persuading. We all started at the base of that, and broke off to our own thoughts. We all think that rhetorical action and thinking has to do with our own personally actions as well. We all talked on how we need to seek our goals while knowing our own limits. To reach our goals in a rhetoric way we needed to know our definition, apply it to our own life, and act to succeed.
All of this just helps justify my own definition so I don't need to change it. I do think we all agreed on what rhetoric was, but used different examples and situations to show what we meant. I think the most important part of everyone's definition was the explanation because it helped us understand what they meant and how we can become rhetorical thinkers and actors ourselves. These situations showed us that we act rhetorically every day with out knowing it. We sometimes have become rhetoric thinkers through the actions of our teachers and what we've learned in school. We now know that we need to follow certain steps to achieve what we need to do, making us rhetoric people.
All of this just helps justify my own definition so I don't need to change it. I do think we all agreed on what rhetoric was, but used different examples and situations to show what we meant. I think the most important part of everyone's definition was the explanation because it helped us understand what they meant and how we can become rhetorical thinkers and actors ourselves. These situations showed us that we act rhetorically every day with out knowing it. We sometimes have become rhetoric thinkers through the actions of our teachers and what we've learned in school. We now know that we need to follow certain steps to achieve what we need to do, making us rhetoric people.
Thinking and Acting Rhetorically
My definition of thinking rhetorically is receiving information and being able to decipher what it means, and what the deeper meaning is. When applied to a paper, someone who thinks rhetorically about it thinks about how they need to set up their paper. They decide what steps are best for them and what they need to do to finish the paper in a timely manner. The figure out what works best for them when they are writing and think about what the paper is about. They decide what type of paper they need to write, what the subject is, and what makes their paper important and informative. they think about what they need to say to persuade their teacher to give them a good grade as well.
Acting rhetorically is using all of your knowledge to process a situation and react in a way that shows how you feel about it. You can show how you thought about the situation and act to show that. You also act rhetorically when you do the right thing in a situation where you may have more than one option. People who act rhetorically act responsibly and respectfully of their rules and own limits. People know when they are doing something wrong, and rhetorical actors would rather think out the situation and avoid doing something incorrectly. They plan out their time, show up to their commitments, and know how to be the best person they can be.
Together a definition of rhetoric would be: Acting and thinking critically about a situation where they can persuade someone. You need to know who you are in order to think rhetoric and to act rhetoric you need to be able to see the situation and decide how your action affects others.
Acting rhetorically is using all of your knowledge to process a situation and react in a way that shows how you feel about it. You can show how you thought about the situation and act to show that. You also act rhetorically when you do the right thing in a situation where you may have more than one option. People who act rhetorically act responsibly and respectfully of their rules and own limits. People know when they are doing something wrong, and rhetorical actors would rather think out the situation and avoid doing something incorrectly. They plan out their time, show up to their commitments, and know how to be the best person they can be.
Together a definition of rhetoric would be: Acting and thinking critically about a situation where they can persuade someone. You need to know who you are in order to think rhetoric and to act rhetoric you need to be able to see the situation and decide how your action affects others.
Thursday, October 1, 2015
Rhetorical Situations-Narratives
We all agreed that bravery and determination are the
most things in the face of adversary and that this is indicated at the end of
the story. Also we agreed that the point of view was first person narrative
which let readers become emotionally connected and also allowed for Brideau’s
commentary. I wrote that her use of surrealism and simple terms allowed her to
bring emotion and life to the story. Other group members also added that her
inclusion of details that brought out the humanity of the story made it seem
more life-like. All of us put that the audience consisted of health care
workers. As for how Brideau worked to sway them to her side, some of us put
that she tried to make Lydia as relatable as possible by mentioning how much of
a compassionate nurse she was, and other put that she used very personal and
emotional words and phrases to appeal the pathos of the readers. Despite our
differences in what we wrote, we all agreed with each other on our points on
Brideau's persuasion techniques.
When "Lydia's Story" and Chapter 2 are put side by
side it becomes apparent the relationship between the two. Most of the
rhetorical strategies mentioned in chapter 2 appear in Lydia's story. It is
very clear Brideau knows exactly who she is writing to in the way she tailors
each sentence to best relate to and persuade the health care workers reading.
Also, the way Brideau ties a relatively minor story back to a larger context,
the support of Katrina survivors, is a masterful use of rhetoric. Chapter 2 and
Lydia's Story also makes us realize the use of rhetoric in our own writing,
especially our own bias. Many of the elements we incorporate into our writing
subconsciously become clear, such as the way we change our writing styles and
tones to better fit our expected audience.
Some of the stories that we all hear on a day-to-day basis
include drama between people, various tasks and
commonly occurring events during the day, tragedies to those we knew,
and stories about unusual things we have previously done. These various types of
narratives all include one recurring motif, the emotions of various people in
differing situations. These narratives interest us because we relate to the
people in them and learn new information that might help us in future
situations.
Those around the same age as us and those with a sense of
humor and those who were not afraid to expose their emotions were the most
powerful to us. Short concise videos also increased the overall impact of the
videos because they didn't water down the person's point. Longer videos which
included the person narrating their own story were also very powerful in the
way that they made us relate to the speaker.
In a History textbook, narrating is kept in a very neutral
tone which makes the story telling uninteresting but also unoffensive or
controversial. If a History narrative was presented in the form a a video game
or movie, it would become much more interesting but at the same time might not
get the main concept of what it is trying to teach across as well. A narrative
such as a YouTube video is very visually interesting but if the
narratives medium was changed to a text based format it would lose much of
its appeal. A history textbook and a Youtube video are similar in that they
both can convey a message but while a History Textbook tends to be lengthy and
very explanatory a YouTube video is far more concise but at the sacrifice of
depth.
Lydia's Story
Questions:
1. Brideau's main point is that even though bad situation people survived by staying calm and being brave. This is indicated in the last paragraph, especially in the last sentence.
2. Brideau wrote this story in third person point of view, with the exception of the first and last paragraphs, which are in fist person point of view. This makes it easier to relate to the author, and during the story of Lydia it paints the picture of what is happening in your head. It also helps to separate which part is the author speaking and which part is Lydia.
3. She makes the story come alive by using specific details and describing emotions. Some specific instances of this are "Lydia climbed off the kitchen counter and waded through the deep water, dragging a small kitchen stool behind her." and "Her tongue became dry and her lips were cracked but she only was aware of being terrified of the water.". These help readers understand what she was doing and how she felt as she sat in her linen closet.
4. This piece would be originally for the readers of that health magazine. People like doctors, and nurses. The tone of the piece suits these readers because it is easy to hear her voice in her text, and she addresses the story like she is talking to a colleague. This is seen on page 131, when she states, " For me, the enormity of the double hurricanes became clean only after witnessing..". Some words that help connect to her are ones like I, hope, determination, and adversity.
1. Brideau's main point is that even though bad situation people survived by staying calm and being brave. This is indicated in the last paragraph, especially in the last sentence.
2. Brideau wrote this story in third person point of view, with the exception of the first and last paragraphs, which are in fist person point of view. This makes it easier to relate to the author, and during the story of Lydia it paints the picture of what is happening in your head. It also helps to separate which part is the author speaking and which part is Lydia.
3. She makes the story come alive by using specific details and describing emotions. Some specific instances of this are "Lydia climbed off the kitchen counter and waded through the deep water, dragging a small kitchen stool behind her." and "Her tongue became dry and her lips were cracked but she only was aware of being terrified of the water.". These help readers understand what she was doing and how she felt as she sat in her linen closet.
4. This piece would be originally for the readers of that health magazine. People like doctors, and nurses. The tone of the piece suits these readers because it is easy to hear her voice in her text, and she addresses the story like she is talking to a colleague. This is seen on page 131, when she states, " For me, the enormity of the double hurricanes became clean only after witnessing..". Some words that help connect to her are ones like I, hope, determination, and adversity.
Chapter Two
Types of writing I've done in the past week:
Texting
Tweeting
Facebook messenger
Notes for Art appreciation
English assignments
Interview questions
Art homework
Math equations
Rhetorical Situations: Tweeting, Notes, and Interview questions
1. Tweeting: When I tweet, usually it's casual. My audience is my friends and other follows who can relate to the situation I am tweeting about. Usually these are other teens who are scrolling through twitter looking for something to make them laugh or to spark their interest. People can like or retweet my tweets if they like them. I tweet to express my in the moment feelings or to tell other people what is happening in my life. This can be funny or serious. It is also normal to post pictures along with tweets.
2. Notes: Notes are usually casual, and the only people reading them are me. Unless my friends need notes for class, I am usually the only "audience". I write notes extremely casually, and try to take short cuts in my writing when taking them. Not always using full sentences or finishing words. When I take notes I like to use pictures as well to help me remember and associate facts with them. I also put a lot of my notes in color because the brain remembers color.
3. Interview Questions: This week I interviewed a teacher for my Intro to education class. The questions were all formal, and were used to answer the larger question, Why teach? I was interviewing him for a paper I have to later write, and used questions that would require longer answers. I tried to stay serious during this interview, and he responded in kind addressing each question with a thoughtful and helpful answer.
Texting
Tweeting
Facebook messenger
Notes for Art appreciation
English assignments
Interview questions
Art homework
Math equations
Rhetorical Situations: Tweeting, Notes, and Interview questions
1. Tweeting: When I tweet, usually it's casual. My audience is my friends and other follows who can relate to the situation I am tweeting about. Usually these are other teens who are scrolling through twitter looking for something to make them laugh or to spark their interest. People can like or retweet my tweets if they like them. I tweet to express my in the moment feelings or to tell other people what is happening in my life. This can be funny or serious. It is also normal to post pictures along with tweets.
2. Notes: Notes are usually casual, and the only people reading them are me. Unless my friends need notes for class, I am usually the only "audience". I write notes extremely casually, and try to take short cuts in my writing when taking them. Not always using full sentences or finishing words. When I take notes I like to use pictures as well to help me remember and associate facts with them. I also put a lot of my notes in color because the brain remembers color.
3. Interview Questions: This week I interviewed a teacher for my Intro to education class. The questions were all formal, and were used to answer the larger question, Why teach? I was interviewing him for a paper I have to later write, and used questions that would require longer answers. I tried to stay serious during this interview, and he responded in kind addressing each question with a thoughtful and helpful answer.
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